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Marilee J. Layman

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07:26 pm: A Day Of Quiet
A day of quiet, cats and me
They sleep and eat, I look and see
I read and post, they sleep some more
A day of quiet, calm at core.

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From:writingortyping
Date:June 27th, 2008 11:44 pm (UTC)
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Haiku!

Also, very nice.
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From:mjlayman
Date:June 27th, 2008 11:46 pm (UTC)
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Well, not actually haiku, just a short poem. Thanks!
From:writingortyping
Date:June 27th, 2008 11:49 pm (UTC)
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while not doing the 5-7-5 syllable thing, I am given to understand that haiku is more than just that, and it had that sense... ergo, I dub thee:

Haiku

(or something like)

Anyway, it had the sonorous structural formality and resonance. It *felt* like haiku. Therefore...?
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From:mjlayman
Date:June 27th, 2008 11:55 pm (UTC)
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LOL Okay!
From:writingortyping
Date:June 28th, 2008 12:20 am (UTC)
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'zactly.

Also, my "Haiku" = "Pretty!"

So, compliment.
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From:mjlayman
Date:June 28th, 2008 12:25 am (UTC)
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Thanks!
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From:heleninwales
Date:June 28th, 2008 12:51 pm (UTC)
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I like the little poem. I hope it won't be too long before I have cats again. The reason I'm not getting them righ now is that I have a week away coming up and I want to get the bathroom redone before I acquire any, then all should be quiet and peaceful for them to settle in.
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From:mjlayman
Date:June 28th, 2008 08:32 pm (UTC)
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Thanks! Yes, you definitely want to have things as calm and in-place before you get new cats!
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